We have been learning how to use genres. this is a piece:
Unsuspectedly, He walks slowly, having the airy feeling that someone might be watching him. okay, he knows, he is plunging into a suicidal image. Dangerously, he walks into a specter-like area. A chill runs up her spine. It might as well just kill him, but his second thought was to accept reality. He was an illegal merchant, and if he dies as it, then so be it. [BrUh]
Hey Hood, it's Gina here.
ReplyDeleteI like your genre story. It's good but honestly could be better, at the beginning its a he but the sentence "A chill runs up HER spine" its a girl. Its also a bit confusing when it says "okay he knows"
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Hola Hood, Its Arlo and I think that needs some work...
ReplyDeletefor starters I don't know what you mean by "specter" as that means either seeing the future or a type of ghost.
A chill ran UP her spine? or down her spine?
Do you think you can check your work next time?
adios Hood,- Arlo